Cardboard King has been removed for recycling. Stay Tuned! :)
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Cardboard King has been removed for recycling. Stay Tuned! :)
17 Comments
3/21/2014 08:40:16 am
How nice that Prince Epoh was able to solve his problems and those of the people of his kingdom at the same time - a win-win! Nice messages about not needing a lot of extra fancy belongings, and about what really matters :) Thanks so much for joining in the springtime writing fun!
Deb Dudley
3/22/2014 07:15:16 am
Thanks for the kind words and organizing a fun contest! 3/21/2014 09:33:16 am
I think Evig is sweet and the story is delightful. Well done.
Deb Dudley
3/22/2014 07:17:31 am
Cecilia, 3/22/2014 12:38:55 pm
Love that he couldn't sleep with all those darn pillows! Nice job!
Deb Dudley
3/23/2014 11:40:50 pm
Julie, thanks for reading it. :) 3/23/2014 03:52:49 am
Fun story, and I especially enjoyed the first paragraphs describing all his stuff -- had to laugh at "cuddle-bug critters". Also love the names and how they change. Good luck! 3/23/2014 05:02:21 am
Hi Deb! What a fun entry...I loved how the boy wanted to live a simpler life...and gave away all of his 'stuff'...and the 'name reversal' was very clever...wonderful message for all of us...Give Hope! 3/24/2014 12:05:35 am
I really enjoyed this! Especially the word play at beginning and end. Nice twist with the name changes also:-) 3/24/2014 01:59:45 am
What a wonderful message. P.S. I LOVED the names Evig and Epoh (and lived them even more when they were reversed.) 3/25/2014 07:17:19 am
You had me intrigued by the title and racing through the alliterative text. Fun read! 3/26/2014 03:42:30 am
Very fun and clever story. Awesome use of language and a great message too. Your comment will be posted after it is approved.
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