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The Cardboard King

3/21/2014

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               Cardboard King has been removed for recycling.  Stay Tuned! :)
17 Comments
Susanna Leonard Hill link
3/21/2014 08:40:16 am

How nice that Prince Epoh was able to solve his problems and those of the people of his kingdom at the same time - a win-win! Nice messages about not needing a lot of extra fancy belongings, and about what really matters :) Thanks so much for joining in the springtime writing fun!

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Deb Dudley
3/22/2014 07:15:16 am

Thanks for the kind words and organizing a fun contest!

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Cecilia Clark link
3/21/2014 09:33:16 am

I think Evig is sweet and the story is delightful. Well done.

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Deb Dudley
3/22/2014 07:17:31 am

Cecilia,
Thanks for reading Cardboard King and your kind words.

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Erika W - Jersey Farm Scribe link
3/22/2014 07:17:04 am

Love the meaning behind this! Nice!

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Sharon link
3/22/2014 08:09:34 am

What a wonderful story Deb! Nice job!

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Julie Rowan - Zoch link
3/22/2014 12:38:55 pm

Love that he couldn't sleep with all those darn pillows! Nice job!

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Deb Dudley link
3/23/2014 11:39:28 pm

Thanks for reading it. :)

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Deb Dudley
3/23/2014 11:40:50 pm

Julie, thanks for reading it. :)

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Annina Luck Wildermuth link
3/23/2014 03:52:49 am

Fun story, and I especially enjoyed the first paragraphs describing all his stuff -- had to laugh at "cuddle-bug critters". Also love the names and how they change. Good luck!

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Vivian Kirkfield link
3/23/2014 05:02:21 am

Hi Deb! What a fun entry...I loved how the boy wanted to live a simpler life...and gave away all of his 'stuff'...and the 'name reversal' was very clever...wonderful message for all of us...Give Hope!

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Alena link
3/23/2014 08:33:41 am

I'm glad he was rewarded for all of his hard work. Nice message.

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Katie link
3/23/2014 09:41:41 am

Very creative!

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Shelly Steig link
3/24/2014 12:05:35 am

I really enjoyed this! Especially the word play at beginning and end. Nice twist with the name changes also:-)

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Elliah Terry link
3/24/2014 01:59:45 am

What a wonderful message. P.S. I LOVED the names Evig and Epoh (and lived them even more when they were reversed.)


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Joanne Roberts link
3/25/2014 07:17:19 am

You had me intrigued by the title and racing through the alliterative text. Fun read!

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Sylvia Liu link
3/26/2014 03:42:30 am

Very fun and clever story. Awesome use of language and a great message too.

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